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another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Alyssa on Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:10 pm

Make up ur own tune

it must be
by alyrox

I'm lost in a world
I don't know where to go
everybody's so sick of me
it makes me want to scream

i've got nowhere to run
no one lets me have any fun
can someone call to me?
can someone know it's me in front of them...

i'm ready for a better place
somewhere i belong

(chorus)
I've always been right there
in the middle of the crowd
but you must have not been seeing me.
everythings gone away
everyone walks away
is it because of me?
it must be

everyone thinks that i'm invisible
everyone thinks i'm sme kind of animal
everyone is passing me by
don't they know that i think they're alive?

i'm ready for a better place
somewhere i belong...

(chorus)
I've always been right there
in the middle of the crowd
but you must have not been seeing me.
everythings gone away
everyone walks away
is it because of me?
it must be


i've gotta get away
i've gotta find a better place
i'm lost i can't get back...

(chorus)
I've always been right there
in the middle of the crowd
but you must have not been seeing me.
everythings gone away
everyone walks away
is it because of me?
it must be

I've always been right there
in the middle of the crowd
but you must have not been seeing me.
everythings gone away
everyone walks away
is it because of me?
it must be

it must be
it must be
because of me

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Mattie on Tue Apr 14, 2009 1:54 am

kinda catchy i suppose whats the melody? And is it a wrap song?

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Guest on Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:36 pm

These are not songs....They would take a max of 1 minute to say i wouldn't call that a song took me 20 seconds to read it.

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Mattie on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:14 pm

man your a faster reader then jack took me around 35!!

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Dennibo on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:36 pm

Can you get your music published?

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Lemon on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:19 pm

You're sentences don't flow enough... It would be a good song if they did.

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Bloonerators on Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:37 pm

Basically; it's not a song.

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Alyssa on Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:40 pm

sorry i rushed i had to go to my sisters softball practice i wo't edit now okay maybe l8r or next month

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by Melissa on Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:00 pm

Bloonerators wrote:Basically; it's not a song.


Hahahah.

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Re: another song written by me alyrox2009

Post by 10art1 on Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:10 pm

I made a song too! wanna hear it? well too bad!

Mary had a little jam and spread it on a waffle
Although if she hadn't eaten 10 her stomach would feel so awful
Round and round and round she rolled,
Eating a big sushi
Then she jumed down off a cliff
And blew up her tushy

i think it's too short but I'm sure my point gets across

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