another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
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another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Alyssa on Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:27 pm
I'll never miss you
By alyrox2009
Style: Soft rock Instruments: Chorus: Main instruments: acoustic guitar Other verses: Piano/keyboard Other: Drum set
Why... do u gotta get so mad at me... even though i didn't do anything... at all?
why... do u gotta walk away? i've always wanted u to stay... until right now?
why... are my thoughts so sad? You make me mad... i'm so depressed. So depressed...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
Now... I wanna run away... I never want to stay... anymore.
Now... I've noticed how... you really didn't care about me... at all.
Now... I can't sleep at night... I wake up in the middle... of the night. I can see...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I am so innocent... you're so guilty.
You go off into the night.
You've stole all my money... I'm so broke you see.
my momma' can't even afford to take care of herself.
Why'd you go away... i shouldn't of wanted you to stay.
'Cause now I know all the answers...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I'll never miss you...
By alyrox2009
Style: Soft rock Instruments: Chorus: Main instruments: acoustic guitar Other verses: Piano/keyboard Other: Drum set
Why... do u gotta get so mad at me... even though i didn't do anything... at all?
why... do u gotta walk away? i've always wanted u to stay... until right now?
why... are my thoughts so sad? You make me mad... i'm so depressed. So depressed...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
Now... I wanna run away... I never want to stay... anymore.
Now... I've noticed how... you really didn't care about me... at all.
Now... I can't sleep at night... I wake up in the middle... of the night. I can see...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I am so innocent... you're so guilty.
You go off into the night.
You've stole all my money... I'm so broke you see.
my momma' can't even afford to take care of herself.
Why'd you go away... i shouldn't of wanted you to stay.
'Cause now I know all the answers...
(chorus)
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
I'll never miss you...
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Tensai_Adam on Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:42 pm
I can't even breathe...
You've suffocated me...
I wanted you to see...
The sadness in me.
Don't come back to me...
I can't even think. You see?
I wanted you to see...
I've got so little left in me.
I'll never miss you. You see?
Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Melissa on Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:18 pm
Rikazu wrote:
Rhyming in every line is not a song. XD
I have to agree xD
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Alyssa on Mon Apr 27, 2009 6:23 am
i'm not trying to rhyme in every line i didn't even know it rhymed in every line until just now! DONT JUDGE ME
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Mattie on Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:11 am
it sounds like a rap song but is it suppost to be a emotional one?
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Cheesybanana on Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:19 am
I need a tune, this sukz0rz
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Alyssa on Mon Apr 27, 2009 2:50 pm
make up ur own tune
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Cheesybanana on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:30 am
*sings along to Never Gonna Give You Up*
It doesn't fit, this suckz0rz
It doesn't fit, this suckz0rz
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Winkley on Tue Apr 28, 2009 7:53 am
Same as CB
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Re: another song (don't worry about the last one i just rushed! I took my time on this one)
by Mattie on Wed Apr 29, 2009 10:29 am
i reckon, (even though some are poor) you should get some published.
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